"Script Coverage" Doesn’t Cut It.
Professional Screenplay Notes from a Director of Development
No Interns. No Formulas. No Bullshit.
These are real, character-driven screenplay notes—not generic script coverage. Feedback that helps you sell your screenplay, attract representation, and write something agents and producers want to read.
Stop Googling “How to Write a Good Screenplay”
You don’t need another expensive online course. Whether it's a feature screenplay, TV pilot, or short film, get personalized, actionable notes from a writer and 2x Nicholl Semifinalist who's also a former Director of Development.
TV Pilot Notes from Someone Who’s Actually Developed Pilots
Professional insights into television script writing, structure, and pilot examples. Learn how to write a pilot that can sell, get staffed, or attract a manager.
What This Is & Isn't
This space is littered with bullshit "coverage" services who farm-out script reads to interns that give back a synopsis of what the screenwriter has already written, with subjective, uncorrelated scores slapped on the top that don't translate to actionable improvement.This isn’t feature coverage or TV pilot coverage.These are screenwriting notes. Surgical problem solving. Specific story solutions.
Not All Drafts Need the Same Notes
I offer two distinct note styles. You choose which one fits your goals.
Good Boy Notes
Encouraging. Constructive. Gentle.
Designed to keep you inspired and moving forward
Perfect for first drafts, polishes, and building momentum
Big Boy Notes
Blunt. Precise. Unfiltered.
Designed to show you exactly what needs fixing
Perfect for rewrites
Unsure? Don't worry. The Questionnaire will guide you.
Choose Your Package
Each package personalized to you and your story
IMPORTANT: Big Boy Notes and Roadmap do NOT spare your feelings
Testimonials
"His notes are razor-sharp. He’s my secret weapon—the guy I trust to push every television script and feature screenplay to the next level. His insight into character, pacing, and structure is unmatched. I don’t send out a draft without his eyes on it." - David J. Meister, Screenwriter
“NO ONE has read as many scripts as this guy and it shows. His ability to pinpoint the strengths and weaknesses in a script and offer clear, constructive guidance is top-notch. He’s articulate, organized, and thorough.What sets him apart is his experience working with directors. He brings not just a writer’s eye, but a full filmmaking perspective. He gets you out of the weeds and shows you the full view.I can’t recommend him enough as a collaborator. He’ll take your feature screenplay or short film script to the next level.” - Joey Oglesby, Producer
"Has a rare gift for truly understanding the scene, hearing the characters, and feeling the essence of the writing—whether it’s dialogue, actions, or motivations. He just gets it, locking into the character voice effortlessly and knowing exactly when the dialogue hits.His ideas stay true to your vision while unlocking fresh, exciting possibilities you didn’t see coming. And beyond his sharp notes, he brings the perfect blend of heart and humor—pushing for depth when needed, or lightening the mood with a wicked joke to keep things fun.He doesn't just improve your story, he reminds you your work matters and helps you find truth in your own writing. He's the best creative partner you could ask for, helping you create your best work while having a blast doing it." - Brandon Tyson, Writer/Director
Who I Am
Post-graduate work in Screenwriting at both UCLA and AFI. Two-time Nicholl Semifinalist. Features that have premiered at SXSW. New York Times Critic's Picks. I've ghostwritten features for writers on studio deals and episodes of aired TV.I've been the Creative Exec who gives screenwriting feedback to baby writers, and the
Director of Development who runs the internal slate. I've run Q&As, given story talks, and presented films at the major film programs and festivals.Now I'm back to my passion, screenwriting full-time.
The Questionnaire
Not Sure What You Need?
1) Do you have a completed draft?
How This Works
Simple. Personal. Fast. The way notes should be.
📝 Step 1: Choose Your Package
First Time? Let the Questionnaire guide you.
📤 Step 2: Upload Your Script
Upload your PDF. Submit the form.
🧠 Step 3: Get Script-Saving Notes
In seven days or less.
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Contact
Still think you need screenplay coverage instead of notes?
Or want feedback on your development material? Beat Sheets. Outlines. You name it.
I provide professional script notes for screenwriters at all stages. And I have a pricing plan for anything. Even incomplete drafts.
Message me below with a word count and what you've got. I'll send you my quote.